To elaborate, I liked the way you kept the mystery going. That’s how you keep the reader reading. Even when I was tired I kept on. Just woke up to say that ☺️
You got me with the opening - I've felt just that way when I've had to drive a loaner car.
Interesting concept. I think we were in Kansas when Larry and I noticed the conjunction of bible verses, giant crosses, and steamy billboards. Keep up the good work. (Ditch the cockroaches, thought - uhh, hate those things.)
Very enjoyable!
Thank you!
To elaborate, I liked the way you kept the mystery going. That’s how you keep the reader reading. Even when I was tired I kept on. Just woke up to say that ☺️
Thanks for that, really appreciate the feedback. Hope you can get some rest :)
You got me with the opening - I've felt just that way when I've had to drive a loaner car.
Interesting concept. I think we were in Kansas when Larry and I noticed the conjunction of bible verses, giant crosses, and steamy billboards. Keep up the good work. (Ditch the cockroaches, thought - uhh, hate those things.)
Thank you for the encouragement! I’ll let you know when the next one drops. Unfortunately, the cockroaches have a return engagement in later stories.
Oh, and I really liked how you tied it to an actual experience of yours.
I couldn't stop reading until it ended! Great story, good ending too. Makes me wonder if he deserved what happened to him.....
Thanks for reading, I really appreciate it!